Thursday, September 29, 2011

Thursday Think Tank #2: Red



Red

Titanium covered, cherry corners
With darkening tips 
We sank, through moments
 Of blinded doubt
Like water dragging across the dashboard


The wind will not blow for us
We are the right made into the wrong
Dwindling fools in silent euphoria,
Tiptoed and heavy in the crimson-spotted
 Sheets.


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THE THURSDAY THINK TANK at POETS UNITED

8 Comments So Far:

  1. Gruesome!

    (I hope that's what you were going for here!)

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  2. Yes, yes that's what I was going for, haha.
    Thank you ^^

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  3. powerful words.

    loved the imagery you send cross.

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  4. oooh, scary and heavy loaded~ Great imagery!

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  5. A glorious examination of cutting through powerful imagery. I tired to do this a few times, but they were never this good. ;D Shah .X

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