Ant Hill
Puffing out of
Parted lips,
From fingertips
It rises like a white
Flame,
Weak kings reign
Hanging thin in
The chapel,
While snapshots
Of memories appear
Heaven-sent,
Back bent
Paid rent—
For the week
When sweet gestures
Seem steep,
You act upon instinct
Skin on skin
As animals would say
Utter words of
Hunger with
Raven black lives
Spider-leg knives
Standing in the
Deep end,
Sporadic waves
Crash upon
Each other—
Slowly.














I can definitely hear those puffs coming from parted lips...and I know how it can be to utter words of hunger and not be fulfilled!
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